Renderforest

We have been learning how to create animations using Renderforest. I really enjoyed being able to choose my slides. We are going to learn how to use different parts of Renderforest.

Rotarota

Time to create some imagery...

For our writing this term we are learning how to create poems / rotarota or creative paragraphs. We get a new hook each day. Here are some of my pieces of writing. We are especially focusing on imagery and using our senses.

Creative writing

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given.This week the words were: pink, huge, bridge, sprinkled and daffodil.

The mythical Forest

By shyne year 5

I had a good day like no other, because I made a friend her name was Hawaii she always made cakes for me if I was starving and I was mostly loving the strawberry Cake because it tastes like strawberry milk. K now let's start the story. One day I was going down the forest pink water stream and to my home. Then something happen some people were coming this way to me so I ran away from then but that start to ran after me and they got me and put me in a box filled with paint and they sprinkled glitter all over me. Then they put me on a car and then we went put the on the huge bridge of New York. Then I heard a little horse noises for the cars beeping… it was Hawaii she saved me from the evil people from taking me from the mythical forest and to be never to be seen again see put me back in my home. But she didn't know were my home was, so I said to her that I live in a hill with daffodil on top of my home too and after all of that we played and played with friends too. But that's a rap bye bye.

The mudslide in Sierra Leone

Week#45

World Events for your writing

I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt

As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…

The mudslide in

Sierra Leone

In Sierra Leone a mudslide killed 200 or more people then I got killed by the mudslide. Then some people were looking for me and my loved ones.  I was in the mud for 5 hours. Then I was a ghost. The people failed to get me and I was stuck in the mud and my loved ones a drowned also. What  was left of me was my bones. Then they looked for my bones,  found my bones, then they put them in a  wooden coffin. My loved ones were killed as well.Then they were brown muddy  ghosts too.