This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. Thanks!
Read and Imagine
Hello I’m Willow I am waiting for someone to find my diary and read it I have a friend name
Sapphire, we live on planet gems cort. I live at Forest-dale, it smells like pine trees and I eat
apples freshly picked everyday from the apple trees. But the one thing is what is the black
things in my diary it is where me and Sapphire are going for a trip to a place named
Mithra cave. We want to find out what it is with the black things are so we made a plan
first is that Sapphire will make a fake copy of the black diamond and give it to the cave
conductor to lead us to Mithra cave. But on the way there we found Mithra it is hard to find
and in the Mithra I found gem bait I didn’t tell Sapphire, she was looking at me weird because
I left some gem bait dust behind me. Part two coming soon.
Sapphire, we live on planet gems cort. I live at Forest-dale, it smells like pine trees and I eat
apples freshly picked everyday from the apple trees. But the one thing is what is the black
things in my diary it is where me and Sapphire are going for a trip to a place named
Mithra cave. We want to find out what it is with the black things are so we made a plan
first is that Sapphire will make a fake copy of the black diamond and give it to the cave
conductor to lead us to Mithra cave. But on the way there we found Mithra it is hard to find
and in the Mithra I found gem bait I didn’t tell Sapphire, she was looking at me weird because
I left some gem bait dust behind me. Part two coming soon.
