Saturday 6 July 2019
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Hi shyne me Mikaylah. I love your animal, its so cute and looks like a angel.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Shyne!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jedi, and I am a year eight in rimu class. I absolutely loved your merged animal, because she is super adorableπ. Did you make this on Google drawings? And how long did it take you to make?
Did you get any inspiration online, Or did you just make it up in your head? I am still super surprised, every time I look at it my eye's just widen. Because if you did make this up your self, you have done a spectacular job. Even I wasn't this good* at drawing digitally when I was your age.
Although this post is super good, to really knock people's socks off I think you should. Add more to your description, maybe talk about why you drew this. Maybe say what Saint-snow's purpose was. But then again I also think that one line was pretty good too. Well it's up to you to decide what you want to do to improve it really.
Before I finish I just had one more question. Was the writing in it a poem? or Just a description for Saint- Snow?
Can't wait to see what you do next Shyne!
Jedi ^.^ πππ
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 7 at Yaldhurst Model School.
This drawing looks... AAMAZING!
I really liked how you presented the image and it looks like you took your time and made it look very creative and I liked the two animals you picked.
Why did you pick those two animals?
I have done a few things like this where you create and animal and/or thing and then write about them.
I think to improve you could add in some more information about why you did this and how you created it.
Thanks and let me know!
-Maddison.
Hello Shyne.
ReplyDeleteI like that you have explained what your mutated animal can do and what she looks like.I like the name you have given it. Because she is a cross between a bird and a cat, does that mean she is a cird or a biat?
Hey Shyne its Aliyah from South hornby.
ReplyDeleteI love your drawing and the way you presented your work is top notch I apsolutly love it.
Why did you do a cat and bird and what did you do the drawing on.