Wednesday, 24 May 2017


WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing .

If  I stayed at home I can’t had the powers,if I hadn't of been picked on,if  everybody was nice, then this wouldn’t of happened. I was scared, terrified and worried walking down the hall. I was terrified as a scared cat but I had one plan to do and a teacher was talking on the phone but the teacher was talking to the police and she closed the door on me because I have powers,I have mine school there was dirty paper everywhere and tables were falling and breaking.Slowly and angrily I was biting my nails and had my cold hands on my face. I went outside and stole a red bike. I was biting my nails; touching my faces with my cold hands; I had sore legs. I went into my trashed house…

Friday, 5 May 2017


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WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.

As a chief it was going fine until something bad happened. Bad people, pirates came and took the food that we were going to gift people in Somalia but  
my soup my tassie soup was gone and they got me and didn't let me go.Then the pirates looked in the crates for goods,but the pirates found nothing.

When they looked in the crates they said”Weir is all the goods?”and then a pirate said “Robots”then the pirate looked shocked when he looked at the robot and the pirates started to run from the robot's.Then the robot’s started to attack the pirates and then the pirates never came back.[The End]