The piano

       WALT

Write a descriptive piece of writing.

The Piano       

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Learn

Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

The Piano

Before you start writing

This video is about a man  who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.

Create  

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

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The piano

I an a old man who liked to play the piano and I have a song what I like to play.my piano is 100 years old she is a little bit rusty so I play hir slow and steady.Now I will play  🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I remember walking my dog and something happen he got lost in the town  and got adopted by a kid.🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I  remember giving a toy to my grandkid it was a toy  horse and a toy car.🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 oh on I remember a bad  thing when my wife died in a car crash and had to get shards of  glass  out of her head and then she died from a shard of glass in   her heart and that was when I was 11 and then I remember my  best friend get shot in the hand and turned into sand.🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶

Now my life, I was born in 1923 and we had food with leafs and seeds.Then my mum got me a toy horse I loved it more than my toys and my toy car. Then I get my old toy horse  to my kid”Dad this is a cool toy horse can I have more”.

“Sorry kid I can't get more I had it as a gift from the 1009 sorry kid”“it ok”.Then I died in 2020.THE END.

Te Ngahere

                 WAL about te Ngahere, the  rakau, the kararehe, the manu and the risks to the  forest
                      

The mudslide in Sierra Leone

Week#45

World Events for your writing

I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt

As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…

The mudslide in

Sierra Leone

In Sierra Leone a mudslide killed 200 or more people then I got killed by the mudslide. Then some people were looking for me and my loved ones.  I was in the mud for 5 hours. Then I was a ghost. The people failed to get me and I was stuck in the mud and my loved ones a drowned also. What  was left of me was my bones. Then they looked for my bones,  found my bones, then they put them in a  wooden coffin. My loved ones were killed as well.Then they were brown muddy  ghosts too.

whales in the sea

Whales in the sea

I was in a dream I was at the beach.Me and my 15 friends and my 45 sisters.So we went to the sea and looked for whales and we went in the sea and we looked everywhere for whales for 9 hours and then we found WHALES.

I had a baby whale in my hands it was so cute and the mum and Dad whale

like it was my family it's so beautiful.

The sandy shipwreck had skeletons in it but a dangerous shipwreck had bad fish's swimming for us The whales hope nothing happened us and but did fish's eat us...

Interland

WALT be cybersmart using a game called Interland. In this game there are 4 different cyber worlds each focussing on a different part of cyber smart. The green mountain which is the one we started with is about being kind and caring. I got to the top of this mountain and scored 240 and 310 see my screenshot below.

Then I decided to have a go at the you meed to get to the top which is about to get the top .

I liked it learning about cyber smart by using this game.

Measurement 2017 of the week

matariki Design

WALT use information to create a new invention

my invention is a farmer and a fisher and it can help you!

Titanium

WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing .


If  I stayed at home I can’t had the powers,if I hadn't of been picked on,if  everybody was nice, then this wouldn’t of happened. I was scared, terrified and worried walking down the hall. I was terrified as a scared cat but I had one plan to do and a teacher was talking on the phone but the teacher was talking to the police and she closed the door on me because I have powers,I have mine powers.in school there was dirty paper everywhere and tables were falling and breaking.Slowly and angrily I was biting my nails and had my cold hands on my face. I went outside and stole a red bike. I was biting my nails; touching my faces with my cold hands; I had sore legs. I went into my trashed house…

tinana

Somalia

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.

 Somalia

As a chief it was going fine until something bad happened. Bad people, pirates came and took the food that we were going to gift people in Somalia but  

my soup my tassie soup was gone and they got me and didn't let me go.Then the pirates looked in the crates for goods,but the pirates found nothing.

When they looked in the crates they said”Weir is all the goods?”and then a pirate said “Robots”then the pirate looked shocked when he looked at the robot and the pirates started to run from the robot's.Then the robot’s started to attack the pirates and then the pirates never came back.[The End]

Beyond the lines

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers

Beyond the Lines

My grandfather was in the war I imagined if i was in there  and if I was as terrified as  a dinosaur chasing me.

I wondered if my grandfather died but he did not die but the note said my friends got killed by enemies and the barbed wire was killing his friends as well, it was terrifying as my grandfather was getting killed as well.

Then my grandfather went to hospital to get a bullet taken out of his wound in his leg and as he said it did hurt.

But his dad did not make it, he  died, so they left him to die.

Then the war ended but it went on and on and on,then the war started again and  and till it ended.  

                                                                                                      

tom true heart

Tom Trueheart

When I was craning to fidget.Then a man came and talk to me my brothers.But a leath was going to get me but I got my sword out and poled the leath then it split in half.Then I whistled for a bird then a bird came to me.I said where are my 6 brothers.Then I had one prodelin is I was a size as a thumb.”Now I am going on a quest.Wait stop bird”I said.”A causal  weird it is on munition”I said.Then I whistled for my bird to fly me to the causal.My 6 brothers.

WAIT NO MY 6 BROTHERS ARE TRAPPED FOR SIX DAYS.But I saved my 6 brothers.

DLO math

this is my DLO for math hope you like it.

MY DLO on maths

WALT we are learning to add by counting an when the larger number is  given first.

Pangarau 16-3-17
If you like it comment on it.Thanks.
comment of new ones.

Te Reo Maori 2017

Kia ora whanau This is my collection of whakatauki and what they mean.
I hope you enjoy reading this I will be adding a new slide every week.

Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga

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