Shyne@Hornby Primary School
I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 13 April 2018
Hatupatu and the Bird Woman
We have been using higher order thinking skills to complete our Maori myth and legend slide presentations.
Friday, 22 September 2017
The piano
WALT
Write a descriptive piece of writing.
The Piano
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.
Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip.
Before you start writing
This video is about a man who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.
Create
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.
Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
- Full stops, capital letters,
- Paragraphs
- We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
The piano
I an a old man who liked to play the piano and I have a song what I like to play.my piano is 100 years old she is a little bit rusty so I play hir slow and steady.Now I will play ๐ต๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต I remember walking my dog and something happen he got lost in the town and got adopted by a kid.๐ต๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต I remember giving a toy to my grandkid it was a toy horse and a toy car.๐ถ๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต oh on I remember a bad thing when my wife died in a car crash and had to get shards of glass out of her head and then she died from a shard of glass in her heart and that was when I was 11 and then I remember my best friend get shot in the hand and turned into sand.๐ต๐ถ๐ต๐ถ๐ต๐ถ
Now my life, I was born in 1923 and we had food with leafs and seeds.Then my mum got me a toy horse I loved it more than my toys and my toy car. Then I get my old toy horse to my kid”Dad this is a cool toy horse can I have more”.
“Sorry kid I can't get more I had it as a gift from the 1009 sorry kid”“it ok”.Then I died in 2020.THE END.
Te Ngahere
WAL about te Ngahere, the rakau, the kararehe, the manu and the risks to the forest
Saturday, 26 August 2017
The mudslide in Sierra Leone
Week#45
World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.
Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:
… as it came rushing towards us we…
The mudslide in
Sierra Leone
In Sierra Leone a mudslide killed 200 or more people then I got killed by the mudslide. Then some people were looking for me and my loved ones. I was in the mud for 5 hours. Then I was a ghost. The people failed to get me and I was stuck in the mud and my loved ones a drowned also. What was left of me was my bones. Then they looked for my bones, found my bones, then they put them in a wooden coffin. My loved ones were killed as well.Then they were brown muddy ghosts too.Saturday, 12 August 2017
whales in the sea
Whales in the sea
I was in a dream I was at the beach.Me and my 15 friends and my 45 sisters.So we went to the sea and looked for whales and we went in the sea and we looked everywhere for whales for 9 hours and then we found WHALES.
I had a baby whale in my hands it was so cute and the mum and Dad whale
like it was my family it's so beautiful.
The sandy shipwreck had skeletons in it but a dangerous shipwreck had bad fish's swimming for us The whales hope nothing happened us and but did fish's eat us...
Saturday, 1 July 2017
Interland
WALT be cybersmart using a game called Interland. In this game there are 4 different cyber worlds each focussing on a different part of cyber smart. The green mountain which is the one we started with is about being kind and caring. I got to the top of this mountain and scored 240 and 310 see my screenshot below.
Then I decided to have a go at the you meed to get to the top which is about to get the top .
I liked it learning about cyber smart by using this game.
Wednesday, 28 June 2017
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