Creative writing

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given.This week the words were: pink, huge, bridge, sprinkled and daffodil.

The mythical Forest

By shyne year 5

I had a good day like no other, because I made a friend her name was Hawaii she always made cakes for me if I was starving and I was mostly loving the strawberry Cake because it tastes like strawberry milk. K now let's start the story. One day I was going down the forest pink water stream and to my home. Then something happen some people were coming this way to me so I ran away from then but that start to ran after me and they got me and put me in a box filled with paint and they sprinkled glitter all over me. Then they put me on a car and then we went put the on the huge bridge of New York. Then I heard a little horse noises for the cars beeping… it was Hawaii she saved me from the evil people from taking me from the mythical forest and to be never to be seen again see put me back in my home. But she didn't know were my home was, so I said to her that I live in a hill with daffodil on top of my home too and after all of that we played and played with friends too. But that's a rap bye bye.

Rata and the Waka

We have been doing some critical thinking with the Story of Rata and the Waka

Hatupatu and the Bird Woman

We have been using higher order thinking skills to complete our Maori myth and legend slide presentations.

The piano

       WALT

Write a descriptive piece of writing.

The Piano       

Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

Learn

Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

The Piano

Before you start writing

This video is about a man  who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.

Create  

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

Share

Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.

The piano

I an a old man who liked to play the piano and I have a song what I like to play.my piano is 100 years old she is a little bit rusty so I play hir slow and steady.Now I will play  🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I remember walking my dog and something happen he got lost in the town  and got adopted by a kid.🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I  remember giving a toy to my grandkid it was a toy  horse and a toy car.🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 oh on I remember a bad  thing when my wife died in a car crash and had to get shards of  glass  out of her head and then she died from a shard of glass in   her heart and that was when I was 11 and then I remember my  best friend get shot in the hand and turned into sand.🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶

Now my life, I was born in 1923 and we had food with leafs and seeds.Then my mum got me a toy horse I loved it more than my toys and my toy car. Then I get my old toy horse  to my kid”Dad this is a cool toy horse can I have more”.

“Sorry kid I can't get more I had it as a gift from the 1009 sorry kid”“it ok”.Then I died in 2020.THE END.

Te Ngahere

                 WAL about te Ngahere, the  rakau, the kararehe, the manu and the risks to the  forest
                      

The mudslide in Sierra Leone

Week#45

World Events for your writing

I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt

As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…

The mudslide in

Sierra Leone

In Sierra Leone a mudslide killed 200 or more people then I got killed by the mudslide. Then some people were looking for me and my loved ones.  I was in the mud for 5 hours. Then I was a ghost. The people failed to get me and I was stuck in the mud and my loved ones a drowned also. What  was left of me was my bones. Then they looked for my bones,  found my bones, then they put them in a  wooden coffin. My loved ones were killed as well.Then they were brown muddy  ghosts too.

whales in the sea

Whales in the sea

I was in a dream I was at the beach.Me and my 15 friends and my 45 sisters.So we went to the sea and looked for whales and we went in the sea and we looked everywhere for whales for 9 hours and then we found WHALES.

I had a baby whale in my hands it was so cute and the mum and Dad whale

like it was my family it's so beautiful.

The sandy shipwreck had skeletons in it but a dangerous shipwreck had bad fish's swimming for us The whales hope nothing happened us and but did fish's eat us...