Friday, 8 June 2018

Creative writing

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given.This week the words were: pink, huge, bridge, sprinkled and daffodil.

The mythical Forest
By shyne year 5

I had a good day like no other, because I made a friend her name was Hawaii she always made cakes for me if I was starving and I was mostly loving the strawberry Cake because it tastes like strawberry milk. K now let's start the story. One day I was going down the forest pink water stream and to my home. Then something happen some people were coming this way to me so I ran away from then but that start to ran after me and they got me and put me in a box filled with paint and they sprinkled glitter all over me. Then they put me on a car and then we went put the on the huge bridge of New York. Then I heard a little horse noises for the cars beeping… it was Hawaii she saved me from the evil people from taking me from the mythical forest and to be never to be seen again see put me back in my home. But she didn't know were my home was, so I said to her that I live in a hill with daffodil on top of my home too and after all of that we played and played with friends too. But that's a rap bye bye.

Friday, 11 May 2018

Rata and the Waka

We have been doing some critical thinking with the Story of Rata and the Waka

Friday, 13 April 2018

Hatupatu and the Bird Woman

We have been using higher order thinking skills to complete our Maori myth and legend slide presentations.

Friday, 22 September 2017

The piano


Write a descriptive piece of writing.

The Piano       
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

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Before you start writing
This video is about a man  who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.

Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
  • Full stops, capital letters,
  • Paragraphs
  • We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.

The piano
I an a old man who liked to play the piano and I have a song what I like to piano is 100 years old she is a little bit rusty so I play hir slow and steady.Now I will play  ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต I remember walking my dog and something happen he got lost in the town  and got adopted by a kid.๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต I  remember giving a toy to my grandkid it was a toy  horse and a toy car.๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽต oh on I remember a bad  thing when my wife died in a car crash and had to get shards of  glass  out of her head and then she died from a shard of glass in   her heart and that was when I was 11 and then I remember my  best friend get shot in the hand and turned into sand.๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ
Now my life, I was born in 1923 and we had food with leafs and seeds.Then my mum got me a toy horse I loved it more than my toys and my toy car. Then I get my old toy horse  to my kid”Dad this is a cool toy horse can I have more”.

“Sorry kid I can't get more I had it as a gift from the 1009 sorry kid”“it ok”.Then I died in 2020.THE END.

Te Ngahere

                 WAL about te Ngahere, the  rakau, the kararehe, the manu and the risks to the  forest

Saturday, 26 August 2017

The mudslide in Sierra Leone


World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
The mudslide in
Sierra Leone
In Sierra Leone a mudslide killed 200 or more people then I got killed by the mudslide. Then some people were looking for me and my loved ones.  I was in the mud for 5 hours. Then I was a ghost. The people failed to get me and I was stuck in the mud and my loved ones a drowned also. What  was left of me was my bones. Then they looked for my bones,  found my bones, then they put them in a  wooden coffin. My loved ones were killed as well.Then they were brown muddy  ghosts too.

Saturday, 12 August 2017

whales in the sea

Whales in the sea

I was in a dream I was at the beach.Me and my 15 friends and my 45 sisters.So we went to the sea and looked for whales and we went in the sea and we looked everywhere for whales for 9 hours and then we found WHALES.

I had a baby whale in my hands it was so cute and the mum and Dad whale
like it was my family it's so beautiful.
The sandy shipwreck had skeletons in it but a dangerous shipwreck had bad fish's swimming for us The whales hope nothing happened us and but did fish's eat us...