The piano

       WALT

Write a descriptive piece of writing.

The Piano       

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The Piano

Before you start writing

This video is about a man  who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.

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WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

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The piano

I an a old man who liked to play the piano and I have a song what I like to play.my piano is 100 years old she is a little bit rusty so I play hir slow and steady.Now I will play  🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I remember walking my dog and something happen he got lost in the town  and got adopted by a kid.🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 I  remember giving a toy to my grandkid it was a toy  horse and a toy car.🎶🎵🎵🎵🎵 oh on I remember a bad  thing when my wife died in a car crash and had to get shards of  glass  out of her head and then she died from a shard of glass in   her heart and that was when I was 11 and then I remember my  best friend get shot in the hand and turned into sand.🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶

Now my life, I was born in 1923 and we had food with leafs and seeds.Then my mum got me a toy horse I loved it more than my toys and my toy car. Then I get my old toy horse  to my kid”Dad this is a cool toy horse can I have more”.

“Sorry kid I can't get more I had it as a gift from the 1009 sorry kid”“it ok”.Then I died in 2020.THE END.