Thursday, 13 April 2017

Beyond the lines

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers
Beyond the Lines

My grandfather was in the war I imagined if i was in there  and if I was as terrified as  a dinosaur chasing me.

I wondered if my grandfather died but he did not die but the note said my friends got killed by enemies and the barbed wire was killing his friends as well, it was terrifying as my grandfather was getting killed as well.

Then my grandfather went to hospital to get a bullet taken out of his wound in his leg and as he said it did hurt.

But his dad did not make it, he  died, so they left him to die.

Then the war ended but it went on and on and on,then the war started again and  and till it ended.  


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